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<DIV>Finally having a chance to read thru the draft here are my comments;</DIV>
<DIV>section 2.1.5.4 define KTAM and KAM same person or different Target archer marshal or just archer marshal?</DIV>
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<DIV>section 3.1.2. forbidden equipment, plastic fletches, are u referring to the solid plastic ones u find on alumin shafts or are u including the plastic feather that u find on nearly all wooden shafts? Iam in the process of finishing 2doz new arrows with the plastic feather fletches. </DIV>
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<DIV>section 4.2.11</DIV>
<DIV> First line change to " the next step involves instructing the archer to bring the bow to full draw and <U>a slow non dry fire release."</U></DIV>
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<DIV>section 4.3.6</DIV>
<DIV>arrow length check, is this a good way to check arrow length?</DIV>
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<DIV>section 7.1 scoring para 2 see appendix b scoring a royal round This paragraph and scoring the royal round are in conflict.</DIV>
<DIV>I prefer the royal round score method.</DIV>
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<DIV>appendix B move sections 2 and 3 around so order should be rules, scoring, ranking. this makes for a more orderly presentation. also section I rule 6. typo marranted for warranted. </DIV>
<DIV>section II. D. highes for highest.</DIV>
<DIV>sincerely tim Mcneely Lord Konikokrad</DIV>
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